Fire From Without Goes Within

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Poetry In Motion (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Wednesday, 30-Apr-2014 23:29:50

I think back and still can recall,

How fire would immediately put my mind at ease as I would listen to the snow outside softly fall,

I would remember the sound as it sent a warm glow all the way from my head to my toes,

Why I got lost in it's light for hours I only would know,

I used to dream a million things as I would sit by it and dream away the hours,

I used to thinkwhen I was growing up as each time at holidays I would pretend with a single crackle I would have any kind of super power,

As I grew older, my dreams and memories began to change except for one special one,

To someday be kissed under the missel toe as the moon sailed away and I felt the rise of the sun!

Post 2 by Imprecator (The Zone's Spelling Nazi) on Friday, 02-May-2014 7:15:03

Yeah, the fire goes out of my ass, into the toilet.

Post 3 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Friday, 02-May-2014 13:49:54

Is this about pyromania?

Bob

Post 4 by LeoGuardian (You mean there is something outside of this room with my computer in it?) on Friday, 02-May-2014 14:56:19

I have no right to judge poetry, but, is the asymmetrical meter on purpose?

Post 5 by forereel (Just posting.) on Friday, 02-May-2014 17:58:44

Second poster has a crush on her. He post all the time on her post.
Just tell her? Smile.

Post 6 by LeoGuardian (You mean there is something outside of this room with my computer in it?) on Friday, 02-May-2014 18:05:36

He does, but perhaps should first learn how to talk to her in a way she will like to listen to. Guessing she does not want to hear such things as are in his posts.

Post 7 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Friday, 02-May-2014 20:39:57

Ah, the problems lovers face today.

Post 8 by forereel (Just posting.) on Saturday, 03-May-2014 16:36:59

Guess your right. Talking about his bowel movements, and plumbing fixtures, just doesn't seem romantic at all, but who knows!